The Taniwha
A gust of wind flew over my head I saw sparkles leaping over the marae
We were welcomed by the people
They did a speech to us. suddenly i saw a tail go into the place
With kai then we all went into the place
Were that giant lizard thing went into when we got inside slowly
All the food was gone
“WHERE IS THE FOOD” Sharisse shouted “maybe it was that giant lizard?”
I said
“SHARISSE WHY ARE YOU SHOUTING” maddie yelled
Then suddenly…
A TANIWHA I ran
Outside It made me pounce
It had very pointy and sharp purple scales its claws
Were ferocious and camouflage
I took another peek it was sad and hungry
I went a little closer and closer and closer
Then I asked the taniwha “why are
You sad” I whispered the Taniwha screamed
I have no friends and i am very hungry and cold and also every body
Keeps invading the waikato river!” then I helped the taniwha back home he felt happiness
It sounded glorious near the waikato river then SPLASH
He hopped into the river and never to be seen again.
THE END
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