A mysterious letter arrived I snatched it from the soldier then I read it and found a loving and cherishing note from my family it said Dear piata we have terrible news this might even break your heart but to say that your mother has passed away from cancer it's sad to know that your going to stay at there for years so we will miss and care and all ways write letters the letter made me more confident then i ever been before it all so made me devastated and crying in tears
I went to the field BOOM!
nice job piata just add more detail to what the note looks like
ReplyDeleteokay dude and thanks for commenting tell more people to look at mine
DeleteIt's cool that you have use'ed you as the solider in the story. maybe next time you can make the story longer because we really liked reading it and maybe you could make a part 2.
ReplyDeletefrom Charlotte and Fatima.
room 9
Your work is excellent
ReplyDeletewow piata you had a really detailed and intresting story about anzac war i think you could be an auther when you grow up an sice your so good at at art maybe you could be an elistrater to
ReplyDeletethat is the best story i have ever seen
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