re-made fairy tale (hansel and gretel)

one day a girl and a boy called Hansel and Gretel were mad"mama I'm hungry" said Hansel "well go outside you are band from this house go and find some food yourself go shoo"said there mother

poor Hansel and Gretel nowhere to go "GASP is that a witch flying on her broom"said Gretel "hehehehehehehe Delicious children i will trick them hehehe" "hello children where are you going" said the witch "well me and my brother Hansel are lost"said the two "oh you must be famished"COME IN AND IT MY DELICIOUS CANDY HOUSE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"yelled the witch "what?" "yes yes you can eat it" "but why wont the it rain on the roof and then it turns soggy " "well yes" "ewwww"               "OK OK maybe out side is gross but what about the inside" "don't people step on the floor boards with there dirty shoes" "right ahead of you always take off my shoes" "ewww you put your gross feet on them ewww" "ok ok ok i like that your giving me good feedback i Will be back with a new house bye bye bye 6 HOURS LATER "I'm back " please leave us alone " "wait wait before you go you must see my INCREDIBLE NORMAL HOUSE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! "wow" " the roof is solid wood so is the walls the inside is normal and pipes are steel " "perfect we will take" "great Dig in" what" "was i not clear i built this house so you can eat it was i not clear?" this house is in eatable " but that's what you said about the last one" the last one was in eatable because it was gross this one is in eatable because we cant eat wood ? are you taking notes" mm yes any way i will be back  bye bye ANOTHER 6 HOURS LATER   "hello children I'm back again" "go away please" "wait i have cooked up something better BEHOLD A HALF NORMAL HALF CANDY HOUSE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
"the floor boards are normal but the inside of it is lycris and wall is solid wood but the molding is caramel "look look the pipes are steel but the water is soda "yeah we will take it" "i cant wait to live in slash eat this house " " i finally got those kids the perfect house just like  i wanted AHHAHAHAHAHa wait was that what i wanted ohhhh right i wanted to eat those kids eh eh the doors locked um kids i kinda forgot why i was doing this and so can you let me in so i can eat you "
"no why would we do that" "Ha jokes to the this door nob is caramel (bite) a not caramel

te whare tapa wha

my book

                  my book is called MOA 

                                          it's about an old new zealand bird called                                  the moa        did you know when moa were                                          alive there were no mamels at all.                                                       1 reason why i like this book because its                                            about an old new zealand bird that lived                                             years ago

                                                      

a moment in time

The words were moving my lips  wanted to say NO! My presentation   was going well?

`We were saving water i felt nervous but was great in the end BUT a word came up i didnt know it  my lips were mumbling i was panicing all the people were staring at me then i got it YAY the people were pleased at last.